for Missing Marbles5/12/2007 c1 
1Gemma Lovell
That's very emotionally intense, roughly that same amount it is amazing. I noticed that you put "my brother and me competeing", and I'm not sure if the "me" was intentional, but if it wasn't, grammatically, it should be changed to "my brother and I". Great job!
Gemma
1Gemma LovellThat's very emotionally intense, roughly that same amount it is amazing. I noticed that you put "my brother and me competeing", and I'm not sure if the "me" was intentional, but if it wasn't, grammatically, it should be changed to "my brother and I". Great job!
Gemma