
5/25/2005 c1
140E.B. Keane-Farrell
VERY good and well-written, except for a couple of common grammar mistakes. Other than that, I'm impressed!

VERY good and well-written, except for a couple of common grammar mistakes. Other than that, I'm impressed!
4/22/2005 c1
16ThePenman
I gotta admit, this was quite a great story. List Material!
And thanks for leaving a review over at my place. Thanks.

I gotta admit, this was quite a great story. List Material!
And thanks for leaving a review over at my place. Thanks.
4/8/2005 c1
110KonekOniko
i like this very much. happy ending, good storyline, and (thank god) likeable characters. very, very good job (your teacher better give you an A!) anyways, i love this story, good job!
~Sumi-chan; what you call love, I call pain.

i like this very much. happy ending, good storyline, and (thank god) likeable characters. very, very good job (your teacher better give you an A!) anyways, i love this story, good job!
~Sumi-chan; what you call love, I call pain.