for Clash3/20/2005 c1 
4Need-To-Breathe
I know what it's like to be told you're sister's perfect and that you're the screw-up(shiver). I love your story, especially the style that you wrote it in. Beautiful irony, eh? Please update soon.
4Need-To-BreatheI know what it's like to be told you're sister's perfect and that you're the screw-up(shiver). I love your story, especially the style that you wrote it in. Beautiful irony, eh? Please update soon.
3/20/2005 c1 20Black Butterfli
This is really interesting. I'm digging the ironic humor. It makes me mad when things happen like that, when one person has to sacrafice everything just so the perfect one can have a life. And even though I may be considered the perfect one in my family, I still feel for Stella and Madison sounds like a real dunce. Ah well. Good story, I hope you continue.
20Black ButterfliThis is really interesting. I'm digging the ironic humor. It makes me mad when things happen like that, when one person has to sacrafice everything just so the perfect one can have a life. And even though I may be considered the perfect one in my family, I still feel for Stella and Madison sounds like a real dunce. Ah well. Good story, I hope you continue.
3/20/2005 c1 5Maroon
Wow, your summary really grabbed my attention. I dont normally read fictions when they have inly just been published and have one chapter, but this really grabbed me.
I really like your style, funny and cynical. Very good start, I can't wait to read how this develops and I get more of an idea about the plot.
Loved it,update soon! Love maroon
5MaroonWow, your summary really grabbed my attention. I dont normally read fictions when they have inly just been published and have one chapter, but this really grabbed me.
I really like your style, funny and cynical. Very good start, I can't wait to read how this develops and I get more of an idea about the plot.
Loved it,update soon! Love maroon
3/20/2005 c1 1Stevshals
i really like this chapter. So far i can see it is going to be pretty interesting. I can't to see what happens next! Update soon!
1Stevshalsi really like this chapter. So far i can see it is going to be pretty interesting. I can't to see what happens next! Update soon!