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3/20/2005 c1 95beti213
the last line made me smile... so true, so true. the imagery here is good without going into the realm of the bizarre (it's hard to describe tongue-kissing prettily) this is well done.
3/20/2005 c1 27Captain Swatsenbeige
WOW! I adore this! I've personally attempted many a times to write a poem about kisses...but never to the extent you have...bravo! *claps*...I like alot! and the ending...so appropriate, you know your kisses babe...keep it up.~Captain~

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