
4/21/2005 c1
5Jessica Tudor
Interesting relationship there. The tone is rather morbid. I like the subtle fantasy. I had to reread part to get it. :)

Interesting relationship there. The tone is rather morbid. I like the subtle fantasy. I had to reread part to get it. :)
4/4/2005 c1
25A SeveredHead
uh, you reviewed my stuff a while ago...your mean to my best friend , hanna. FUCK OFF!And BTW, i give you an F for effort!

uh, you reviewed my stuff a while ago...your mean to my best friend , hanna. FUCK OFF!And BTW, i give you an F for effort!
3/31/2005 c1 Sergeant Sarge
A decently written story, though the the underlaying ninja theme was a bit embellished.
A decently written story, though the the underlaying ninja theme was a bit embellished.
3/27/2005 c1
15Macca Lane
i appreictie your honesty iqikdtnrn aidmve ony m tiroyjgnint he netr nyr aurfuytrewhok

i appreictie your honesty iqikdtnrn aidmve ony m tiroyjgnint he netr nyr aurfuytrewhok
3/22/2005 c1
69this is britt
At times, I was confused, but at the end I loved it. really. you have such a knack for description. if you write a book I'll read it.

At times, I was confused, but at the end I loved it. really. you have such a knack for description. if you write a book I'll read it.