
5/23/2006 c7 shadowz
hey, dont be too down. your story is pretty good. hope dont decide to drop it...
shadowz
hey, dont be too down. your story is pretty good. hope dont decide to drop it...
shadowz
1/15/2006 c4 Me
I like it...I can't think of anything to critique yet...
Keep on writing and I'll keep on reading!
I like it...I can't think of anything to critique yet...
Keep on writing and I'll keep on reading!
3/22/2005 c1 JohnnyGodfather
This story is beautiful; it truly is. I love the great, sexy, romantic vibe it has to it. To me, that sexiness is what makes romance stories good or bad, and what makes yours a good one. Keep writing, you truly are a master at your craft.
P.S. R&R Mr. Jones. Peace!
This story is beautiful; it truly is. I love the great, sexy, romantic vibe it has to it. To me, that sexiness is what makes romance stories good or bad, and what makes yours a good one. Keep writing, you truly are a master at your craft.
P.S. R&R Mr. Jones. Peace!