for United Segregation8/4/2012 c4 
4runaway sheet
Wow, I'd like to say that you handled the whole story with really mature emotions. The main character's reaction to his situation was so raw and your description so real. I hate when rape scenes are done callously and this one wasn't. Almost cried myself with how frustrated and dead the main character (whose name eludes me now :( ) would have felt. Very well written. All the cops were pretty professional. Not plot-device cops. This whole story has such a clinical feel to it.
Thanks for the story :)
4runaway sheetWow, I'd like to say that you handled the whole story with really mature emotions. The main character's reaction to his situation was so raw and your description so real. I hate when rape scenes are done callously and this one wasn't. Almost cried myself with how frustrated and dead the main character (whose name eludes me now :( ) would have felt. Very well written. All the cops were pretty professional. Not plot-device cops. This whole story has such a clinical feel to it.
Thanks for the story :)
7/23/2008 c5 5Curb Crasher
This is so freaking amazing! Thanks for writing!
. . . Are you okay? Did anything happen in the past three years?
5Curb CrasherThis is so freaking amazing! Thanks for writing!
. . . Are you okay? Did anything happen in the past three years?
7/20/2006 c5 S
You're an extremely good writer. Great story.
You're an extremely good writer. Great story.
6/13/2006 c5 32eldrin
This went from a story looking forward to a jolly vacation and lots of fun sex to surprising intenseness. Realistically angsty, without heavy overburdening. An excellent story. I don't suppose that it will ever be updated?
32eldrinThis went from a story looking forward to a jolly vacation and lots of fun sex to surprising intenseness. Realistically angsty, without heavy overburdening. An excellent story. I don't suppose that it will ever be updated?
7/13/2005 c5 25Esquirella
I just read this again. The drama you wrote here is very moving. You can't help but feel for Aaron.
25EsquirellaI just read this again. The drama you wrote here is very moving. You can't help but feel for Aaron.
7/7/2005 c5 Pure
I love this story because it’s so realistically dark and serious. I really feel for Aaron. Cheers!
I love this story because it’s so realistically dark and serious. I really feel for Aaron. Cheers!
7/3/2005 c5 ddz008
Great chapter!This story is really interesting, I love your writing and I want to know what are you planning to do in later chapters.Nineteen kilos is a lot :S I hope he gets help quickly!Hope to see the next chapter pretty soon!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
Great chapter!This story is really interesting, I love your writing and I want to know what are you planning to do in later chapters.Nineteen kilos is a lot :S I hope he gets help quickly!Hope to see the next chapter pretty soon!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
7/3/2005 c5 21princess max
This story makes me want to grab everyone who's written a crappy rape story and shout THIS IS HOW YOU FUCKING DO IT.
'He didn’t want to tell Jonathan that he was gay and it had always been his fantasy to have his bed partner tie him up' - I give you one thousand million bonus points for this.
21princess maxThis story makes me want to grab everyone who's written a crappy rape story and shout THIS IS HOW YOU FUCKING DO IT.
'He didn’t want to tell Jonathan that he was gay and it had always been his fantasy to have his bed partner tie him up' - I give you one thousand million bonus points for this.
5/25/2005 c4 2A Boy Flower
I think I missed something, but I'm far too lazy to go back and read over it.
The dude in the bathroom isn't the dude who raped him, correct? I liked the bathroom dude.
NO! I've changed my mind! The bathroom dude is another victim. And we will soon find out the rapist is Aaron's father!
...Yes, I've been drinking too much Pepsi...
2A Boy FlowerI think I missed something, but I'm far too lazy to go back and read over it.
The dude in the bathroom isn't the dude who raped him, correct? I liked the bathroom dude.
NO! I've changed my mind! The bathroom dude is another victim. And we will soon find out the rapist is Aaron's father!
...Yes, I've been drinking too much Pepsi...
5/25/2005 c3 A Boy Flower
So, I figured, since I'm finally logged in again, and you're on your lunch break, I'd catch up with my reviewing you, since I'm really far behind...
So, as weird as it is for me to say this - I liked this chapter. For what happened. Because I really wasn't expecting it and I thought it was great. I was like "..." after reading it, for a good twenty seconds, let me tell you...
Alright, onto the next chapter!
So, I figured, since I'm finally logged in again, and you're on your lunch break, I'd catch up with my reviewing you, since I'm really far behind...
So, as weird as it is for me to say this - I liked this chapter. For what happened. Because I really wasn't expecting it and I thought it was great. I was like "..." after reading it, for a good twenty seconds, let me tell you...
Alright, onto the next chapter!
5/8/2005 c4 ddz008
Great chapter!Poor Aaron, must be horrible to be raped... T_TI liked Jon, he seems to be a nice detective.Hope things get better for him.Keep writing, please!Hope to see the next chapter pretty soon!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
Great chapter!Poor Aaron, must be horrible to be raped... T_TI liked Jon, he seems to be a nice detective.Hope things get better for him.Keep writing, please!Hope to see the next chapter pretty soon!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D