for Jimmy Jim10/5/2005 c1 
62Sunflower dream
i cant believe i missed this one! =)it's very good, but i almost wish you left a little more to the reader's imagination. sad and poignant topic tho! love ya!
62Sunflower dreami cant believe i missed this one! =)it's very good, but i almost wish you left a little more to the reader's imagination. sad and poignant topic tho! love ya!
3/24/2005 c1 98Ryan Patrick Bailey
Great poem! I really like the ending! You did an excellent job with this one, it flows real well-keep it up. Write on! I'll check back for more real soon. Take care, Ryan.
98Ryan Patrick BaileyGreat poem! I really like the ending! You did an excellent job with this one, it flows real well-keep it up. Write on! I'll check back for more real soon. Take care, Ryan.