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12/5/2007 c1 7facingdemons
This was a beautiful story. I loved it. Absolutely loved it. Like a modern Romeo And Juliet.
10/18/2006 c1 6blue-dan
WOW i absolutely loved this story! I do hope you write some more sometime :D keep up the great writing! ;)
9/24/2006 c1 31Leaving Here
hmm.. i love this!

keep writhin
8/11/2006 c1 12elisefey
Wow. There was really something beautifully and eerily romantic about this. I truly enjoyed it. Almost gave me chills.
7/18/2006 c1 17DustN727
i like this alot...and i personally like the ending the way it is, so im glad u havent added anything to it yet...its happy and tragic...nice
7/7/2006 c1 15Beloved Sin
I like this! it very nice
2/25/2006 c1 18lulujynxgemini
very interesting... very different... but interesting...
2/10/2006 c1 1horsie890
...wow...that is really cool. I am terrible at descriptions, but you sure aren't.
11/8/2005 c1 8BJ Worth
Huh, that was pretty good. I liked the description, especially about staring at the moon, and the ending was good.
11/3/2005 c1 3Broken doll on a dirty shelf
This was excellent! It had such a sweet ending in a tragic way. Especially after he says 'never say that again', it really...it worked.

Harlequin~Please fix me...
11/2/2005 c1 163Frosted Midnight
ohh...this is good! you should definantly write more! I want to know what happens next!
9/14/2005 c1 85Embellished Heart
awesome work! keep it up!
8/20/2005 c1 Adam
very sad
7/20/2005 c1 33Peack K. Wii
wow- very very impressed, all your writings are true, meaningful, and make ppl think. this piece, if i had to chose, is my fav. its so beautifully written and will stay in my mind forever, this has got to be one of the best things i've read on fictionpress
5/8/2005 c1 BigBro
A bit confusing, but also seems to contain an inner message or being of some sort. Quite sad.
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