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5/2/2005 c1 69this is britt
I swear I reviewed this before. Regardless, I loved it. I know nothing about mangas but you remind me of some newfound Emily Dickinson.
4/12/2005 c1 Autumn1234
"Let’s watch the rain play…"

*is instantly reminded of the rain song*

"Rain rain rain, we love rain, splash splash splash, fun fun fun, rain rain rain ... "
4/2/2005 c1 Poppy Pyres
I like the structure of this poem and the concept is very... interesting. I am not sure I understand what you are getting at, but the rhythm and imagery was very nicely carried out. well done
3/26/2005 c1 76Karma Chameleon
Not bad. I like it, thought something in this line needs to be fixed "My job it simple" but other than that, I think you've done a nice job.

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