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3Krystal Nickle
OMG! that is so sad. i know that there really are parents out there that does that kind of thing but reading about it is just so sad. please update again soon. this is a very interesting sory.
3Krystal NickleOMG! that is so sad. i know that there really are parents out there that does that kind of thing but reading about it is just so sad. please update again soon. this is a very interesting sory.
3/28/2005 c4 23Nut
i liked this chapter a lot. it's very relatable, if that's even a word. so yes, great work!
23Nuti liked this chapter a lot. it's very relatable, if that's even a word. so yes, great work!
3/28/2005 c3 6twistedFAerieTALes
woah! how could u leave me hangin like that! u seem to do what i say...so heres something...MAKE UR CHAPTERS LONGER! grr...the claws come out..lol. update soon! ~Sage
6twistedFAerieTALeswoah! how could u leave me hangin like that! u seem to do what i say...so heres something...MAKE UR CHAPTERS LONGER! grr...the claws come out..lol. update soon! ~Sage
3/28/2005 c4 Sara Kay
Great chapter, some of content sounds like me. Anyway, I love this story and how it's moving up so fast! I love the way you give us frequent updates and how you give us just enough information to keep the readers interested. Great Job! Update soon!
*Sara Kay
Great chapter, some of content sounds like me. Anyway, I love this story and how it's moving up so fast! I love the way you give us frequent updates and how you give us just enough information to keep the readers interested. Great Job! Update soon!
*Sara Kay
3/28/2005 c4 6tickledblue
just found this story, and i'm glad i did! great start! by the way, at the end of this chapter, the line: "I am simply a puppet... lifeless as you make me dance..." did that come from you? 'cause it's an amazing line!
6tickledbluejust found this story, and i'm glad i did! great start! by the way, at the end of this chapter, the line: "I am simply a puppet... lifeless as you make me dance..." did that come from you? 'cause it's an amazing line!
3/28/2005 c3 20CL Le
lol, yep you actually are on my author alert list ;) anyways, i liked this chapter alot. great job! update soon!
20CL Lelol, yep you actually are on my author alert list ;) anyways, i liked this chapter alot. great job! update soon!
3/28/2005 c3 1flonshoe
BRAVO! That was uber-quick! I liked this chapter. Kinda sad though *sniffle*...PUS! I think I like Tom...hm...
LuvLauren
1flonshoeBRAVO! That was uber-quick! I liked this chapter. Kinda sad though *sniffle*...PUS! I think I like Tom...hm...
LuvLauren
3/28/2005 c3 8bulletproof.cupid
Hmm so she has an eating disorder and cuts herself too. Tom pretty much did the same along with drugs. Interesting...
Well, good work. You chapters actually very short but they'll do as long as you continue to update quick ;o) Just a bit of advice, need more information on the characters... 'cause that's what they saam as: just plain charcters. They need developing and well, a life of their own. Awesome work so far,
~Bubblegum
8bulletproof.cupidHmm so she has an eating disorder and cuts herself too. Tom pretty much did the same along with drugs. Interesting...
Well, good work. You chapters actually very short but they'll do as long as you continue to update quick ;o) Just a bit of advice, need more information on the characters... 'cause that's what they saam as: just plain charcters. They need developing and well, a life of their own. Awesome work so far,
~Bubblegum
3/27/2005 c3 Sara Kay
God woman, you do update fast! But don't get me wrong, that's a great thing! This story is turning out great and I'm very happy we now know why she was in rehab. Now, keep up the fastly updating and have fun with your story!
*Sara Kay
God woman, you do update fast! But don't get me wrong, that's a great thing! This story is turning out great and I'm very happy we now know why she was in rehab. Now, keep up the fastly updating and have fun with your story!
*Sara Kay
3/27/2005 c3 FadingDarkness
Damn your fast lol. Your the fastest updater in my favorites list. Which is definitely a good thing.
Anyway great chapter. Tom seems really nice to me. I don't get why she hates him so much. If I were her I would love him lol. But thats just me.
Well update soon. Than again I guess I don't really have to say that cuz I know you will.
Keep up the great work!
Damn your fast lol. Your the fastest updater in my favorites list. Which is definitely a good thing.
Anyway great chapter. Tom seems really nice to me. I don't get why she hates him so much. If I were her I would love him lol. But thats just me.
Well update soon. Than again I guess I don't really have to say that cuz I know you will.
Keep up the great work!