for Behind the Mask3/26/2005 c1 
25raniaur
My brain's not wroking, but what's a rehab? And this is a cool start. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
25raniaurMy brain's not wroking, but what's a rehab? And this is a cool start. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
3/26/2005 c1 3doragon41
thomas is so much better than tom, please call him thomas! its such a sexy name!
3doragon41thomas is so much better than tom, please call him thomas! its such a sexy name!
3/26/2005 c1 Bloodshot
good story so far, but i have a question, why did you put Kris's POV, when her name is Adrianne?
good story so far, but i have a question, why did you put Kris's POV, when her name is Adrianne?
3/26/2005 c1 6twistedFAerieTALes
some confusion w/who the protagonist is, but other than that, really good start. write more and update soon! ~Sage
6twistedFAerieTALessome confusion w/who the protagonist is, but other than that, really good start. write more and update soon! ~Sage
3/26/2005 c1 Krystal Nickle
this seems like a good story so far. the little twist with her being in rehab was good. please write more.
this seems like a good story so far. the little twist with her being in rehab was good. please write more.
3/26/2005 c1 23Nut
really good start. it's just that you wrote "Kris' POV" instead of "Adrianne's POV" at the end. that was the only confusing thing. and just for future chapters, "homeroom" is one word. other than that, awesome story! please update soon!
23Nutreally good start. it's just that you wrote "Kris' POV" instead of "Adrianne's POV" at the end. that was the only confusing thing. and just for future chapters, "homeroom" is one word. other than that, awesome story! please update soon!
3/26/2005 c1 9double-life
You changed the characters names and it got so confusing. Isn’t the teachers name Mr. Clearwaters and not Mr. Birmingham and isn’t it Adrianne Porter and Kristine Michaels. At the end you were calling her Kris Michaels. Adrianne is the one who Michael Thomas wants to go out with or at least that’s what you said at the beginning. You have to watch out for these things.
9double-lifeYou changed the characters names and it got so confusing. Isn’t the teachers name Mr. Clearwaters and not Mr. Birmingham and isn’t it Adrianne Porter and Kristine Michaels. At the end you were calling her Kris Michaels. Adrianne is the one who Michael Thomas wants to go out with or at least that’s what you said at the beginning. You have to watch out for these things.
3/26/2005 c1 Cherrie
Um... are you sure you meant Kris' point of view? other than that bit of confusion, it sounds like an interesting story and I hope you continue to write it.
Um... are you sure you meant Kris' point of view? other than that bit of confusion, it sounds like an interesting story and I hope you continue to write it.