for Behind the Mask4/8/2005 c10 becxfok01
Ahh, poor Kris. Well, even though it doesn't seem like it, I think that there is a thin line between the two eating disorders. Anyways, keep up!
Ahh, poor Kris. Well, even though it doesn't seem like it, I think that there is a thin line between the two eating disorders. Anyways, keep up!
4/7/2005 c10 catleyia
Yay! You are back! *claps*
Yay! You are back! *claps*
4/7/2005 c10 topsecret32
y are ur stories always w/ people w/ problems like this?
y are ur stories always w/ people w/ problems like this?
4/7/2005 c10 Kira
Good chapter...sad but good writing. Please update soon!
Good chapter...sad but good writing. Please update soon!
4/7/2005 c10 murfdurf22
woah thats deep, update fast, sorry didn't feel like signin in
woah thats deep, update fast, sorry didn't feel like signin in
4/4/2005 c9 
11arachibutyrophobia
if ur having problems with length, coose a scene and add loads of descriptions on what they say, how they say it, body language, facial expression, reactions, surroundings, etc., and show some of the scenes that the characters talk about. it'll add length i promise ;-)
11arachibutyrophobiaif ur having problems with length, coose a scene and add loads of descriptions on what they say, how they say it, body language, facial expression, reactions, surroundings, etc., and show some of the scenes that the characters talk about. it'll add length i promise ;-)
4/4/2005 c7 arachibutyrophobia
at least she'll have the support of her friend... i felt like the scenes were really rushed, tho, and could be slowed down a lot.
at least she'll have the support of her friend... i felt like the scenes were really rushed, tho, and could be slowed down a lot.
4/4/2005 c5 arachibutyrophobia
*sigh* its so sad because people parents really can be that blind. it says something that tom seems to be improving a bit... because she needs help o_0
*sigh* its so sad because people parents really can be that blind. it says something that tom seems to be improving a bit... because she needs help o_0
4/4/2005 c4 arachibutyrophobia
jeez its so sad... makes me so pissed at her parents. and,i guess, a bit pissed at her.
jeez its so sad... makes me so pissed at her parents. and,i guess, a bit pissed at her.
4/4/2005 c3 arachibutyrophobia
o wow dramatic... cant wait to find out more about their past - tt must have been intense
o wow dramatic... cant wait to find out more about their past - tt must have been intense