for Forsaken and Alone3/26/2005 c1 
6a falling star
I really liked it, especially the choruses...oh and the last line was nice. i found the fact that the title was in the center at the top while the rest of the song was on the left a little distracting. besides that, i don't really have any constructive criticism for you. great job!
6a falling starI really liked it, especially the choruses...oh and the last line was nice. i found the fact that the title was in the center at the top while the rest of the song was on the left a little distracting. besides that, i don't really have any constructive criticism for you. great job!