12/21/2006 c1 tesa131313
I don't exactly enjoy these kinds of poems. I wrote that same poem in sixth grade. THE EXACT SAME ASSIGNMENT. But no way would I post it. Poems like these that describe the author are just so...elementary.
I don't exactly enjoy these kinds of poems. I wrote that same poem in sixth grade. THE EXACT SAME ASSIGNMENT. But no way would I post it. Poems like these that describe the author are just so...elementary.
7/3/2006 c1 22Beautifuly Broken
OH my word I LOVE Iam poems I should totaly publish some of mine, but yours is way wicked better! It is the kooliest!
Peace
OH my word I LOVE Iam poems I should totaly publish some of mine, but yours is way wicked better! It is the kooliest!
Peace
5/7/2006 c1 12A.smartone
The descriptions you put are wounderful, you described many people in the world not just yourself. Great job
The descriptions you put are wounderful, you described many people in the world not just yourself. Great job
4/21/2006 c1 Needa S
I guess in a sense I used to feel this way but no more, I have found peace. Anyhow its very sincere write. Awesome job putting it together. Write on!
I guess in a sense I used to feel this way but no more, I have found peace. Anyhow its very sincere write. Awesome job putting it together. Write on!
1/2/2006 c1 6colgate
I love this poem, it's really wonderful. I like the theme and it's really well written. I feel the same in many ways.
*col*
I love this poem, it's really wonderful. I like the theme and it's really well written. I feel the same in many ways.
*col*
7/27/2005 c1 27Ruby Waters
i can relate to this. i think everyone can. deep inside i guess everyone feels the same just that our exterior which we can fake reveals something different. this has to be one of my favourite poems.
i can relate to this. i think everyone can. deep inside i guess everyone feels the same just that our exterior which we can fake reveals something different. this has to be one of my favourite poems.
3/28/2005 c1 40sweetxinsincerity
that was awesome! i like how you repeat "I am quiet, yet angry" at the beginning of the first stanza and then at the end of each stanza. this probably describes me a little bit; i can't really figure out how i really am right now. my fav line is "I try to fit in, but in return, I get pushed away." I feel like that a lot. yeah i can relate to this whole poem. it was really good.
that was awesome! i like how you repeat "I am quiet, yet angry" at the beginning of the first stanza and then at the end of each stanza. this probably describes me a little bit; i can't really figure out how i really am right now. my fav line is "I try to fit in, but in return, I get pushed away." I feel like that a lot. yeah i can relate to this whole poem. it was really good.