for Empty3/26/2005 c1 
19DiffusedBlues
Something about a bleak winter day and how it makes you feel?
You can't live without it? Are you a masochist?
You're a guilty kinda guy... and this is my first review in some time.
P.S. Good job! You've done some thought-provoking work right here. Pat yourself on the back.
19DiffusedBluesSomething about a bleak winter day and how it makes you feel?
You can't live without it? Are you a masochist?
You're a guilty kinda guy... and this is my first review in some time.
P.S. Good job! You've done some thought-provoking work right here. Pat yourself on the back.
3/26/2005 c1 70elvenstorm
Love how you end this with the double repetition. This is an interesting poem, like the layout. Well done!
70elvenstormLove how you end this with the double repetition. This is an interesting poem, like the layout. Well done!