for Prince and the Pauper7/15/2005 c1 eug
HALLO KUKU! i hate how you just write so well )): i decided to say hi today cos i never ever did (:
HALLO KUKU! i hate how you just write so well )): i decided to say hi today cos i never ever did (:
6/21/2005 c1 
2Selah Ex Animo
Excellent. I LOVE this. You are such a wonderful writer! The imagery, once again, was plentiful and vivid, and everything is superbly beautiful. Wow. Kudos!
- Selah
2Selah Ex AnimoExcellent. I LOVE this. You are such a wonderful writer! The imagery, once again, was plentiful and vivid, and everything is superbly beautiful. Wow. Kudos!
- Selah
4/24/2005 c1 hahahahahaha
ah yes, Easter. looks like i'm quite late in reviewing this poem, but never mind. i like the images again, especially some interesting observations, e.g. "Three again, the magic number, trinity).
ah yes, Easter. looks like i'm quite late in reviewing this poem, but never mind. i like the images again, especially some interesting observations, e.g. "Three again, the magic number, trinity).
3/31/2005 c1 ellosse
i like this. really insightful if you arent already acquainted to the story. Keep writing! And congrats on making it to CAP(:
i like this. really insightful if you arent already acquainted to the story. Keep writing! And congrats on making it to CAP(:
3/28/2005 c1 14matapokker
HELLO! i like this one, deep and sensitive to pain. freestyle! especially liked these lines. "The crowd just watched onAs if he were in a circus, a zooPointing, laughing, casting lots"
nice! keep on working (:
14matapokkerHELLO! i like this one, deep and sensitive to pain. freestyle! especially liked these lines. "The crowd just watched onAs if he were in a circus, a zooPointing, laughing, casting lots"
nice! keep on working (: