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5/13/2005 c1 Marybeth
Yes, i seem to be reviewing you a lot. lol. I love the Rain! When ever it is storming i try to be out side. lol Ok on to the Review. To me you seem to reley on the word "sky" a lot. Like every other verse had that word in it. But i liked your style of free verse.
3/28/2005 c1 17Kinna
Wow, I felt like I was in a storm while reading this. Also, great imagery.

~Kinna
3/27/2005 c1 59Unholy Haven
Really captures the mood of being caught in a storm! Very good!
3/27/2005 c1 22dragonsdream13
cool. it really flows well. my favorite line is the last one. it really sets up an image. keep writing.-DragonsDream

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