for Storm Water3/28/2005 c1 
17Kinna
I loved the ending, but the first three lines were a little confusing. Will the person be gone because of the storm/flood water? If the person is wondering what will happen to himself/herself, then why are they so certain of what will happen in the beginning? I'm just having trouble connecting the very beginning to everything else. Other than that it was a good poem.
~Kinna
17KinnaI loved the ending, but the first three lines were a little confusing. Will the person be gone because of the storm/flood water? If the person is wondering what will happen to himself/herself, then why are they so certain of what will happen in the beginning? I'm just having trouble connecting the very beginning to everything else. Other than that it was a good poem.
~Kinna