
4/12/2005 c2
7blazing gem
Hey. Wow... Graham sounds like a hottie.. ^^ And he's finally noticing whats been in front of him all along.. Good job! I wanna see more interactions between the two next chapter.

Hey. Wow... Graham sounds like a hottie.. ^^ And he's finally noticing whats been in front of him all along.. Good job! I wanna see more interactions between the two next chapter.
4/7/2005 c2
11Luv and Peace
Hey, awesome details. This time, tenses didn't get switched and thats really good. So far the story is doing alot to generate reader's interest. Anyway, I should get back to chemistry (rolls eyes). Update soon!

Hey, awesome details. This time, tenses didn't get switched and thats really good. So far the story is doing alot to generate reader's interest. Anyway, I should get back to chemistry (rolls eyes). Update soon!
3/28/2005 c1
11Luv and Peace
Hey
Yummy! Graham sounds really hot, but he reminds me of bulldog, u know ,all stubborn like! newaz, a good start, u might just want to watch out for your tenses, like you switch from past to present. (i do that al the time, and when i recheck it, AFTER I POST IT, im like well, DUH), newaz, wondering what the new twist is. Update soon!

Hey
Yummy! Graham sounds really hot, but he reminds me of bulldog, u know ,all stubborn like! newaz, a good start, u might just want to watch out for your tenses, like you switch from past to present. (i do that al the time, and when i recheck it, AFTER I POST IT, im like well, DUH), newaz, wondering what the new twist is. Update soon!
3/27/2005 c1
13BellezAzul
I love Grahman... and Annabella cute together. My kinda guy *wink wink* Tall, dark, and handsome! Me gusto muy mucho. :o) Update soon baby doll!

I love Grahman... and Annabella cute together. My kinda guy *wink wink* Tall, dark, and handsome! Me gusto muy mucho. :o) Update soon baby doll!
3/27/2005 c1
7blazing gem
Hi! I like this beginning very much! Then again, I love stories with best friends that fall in love! ^^ I like the fact that you didn't make Annabelle those typical beautiful southern bells. It's more realistic that way! Good job and you should definetly continue!

Hi! I like this beginning very much! Then again, I love stories with best friends that fall in love! ^^ I like the fact that you didn't make Annabelle those typical beautiful southern bells. It's more realistic that way! Good job and you should definetly continue!