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4/13/2005 c1 281ThisCut-UpAngel
*speechless*. I've been stuck in the middle of several divorces of my mother's-you did an excellent job on capturing what the pain is like.. I hope you find peace. Amazing work!
3/29/2005 c1 157darkmistresslae
... that's sad ac.. it almost HURTS! but it's a really super good poem... and i can relate to it... well written... wonderful emotion and voice and imagery!
3/28/2005 c1 54rainkisser
that was sad. it really was. you are a wonderful person! I know things will look up for you! I know it! We get to see each other tommorow! YEY! see, it's looking up already! this was a little confusing to follow sometimes... who was the conversation with exactly? I couldn't tell if it was with yourself or with your parents. It had a good (well, sad, but well written) feel to it though, and it flowed well. i love you! do know that, and know that it will be better! much love -Mia
3/28/2005 c1 42and flowers
hum, written very well. i think you've brushed the feelings one might have ( i wouldn't know i have not gone through a divorce. ). i rather liked the ending. it seems to sum up more than just this one subject. nice job, love.

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