for Unconditional4/12/2005 c1 cheryl
Wow, this is really good- and one of my favourite bible passages too. You said you wanted something constructive so... i think it feels as though it needs some sort of a conclusion, it feels a bit.. incomplete? Amazing poem though, really powerful, it speaks volumes to me.
Wow, this is really good- and one of my favourite bible passages too. You said you wanted something constructive so... i think it feels as though it needs some sort of a conclusion, it feels a bit.. incomplete? Amazing poem though, really powerful, it speaks volumes to me.