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4/5/2005 c1 34scorchingray
this is powerful...whoa
4/2/2005 c1 120hypocrite extrodinare
oh...my...god... thats awesome! so cool!

~luvs from the lil vampire on the funeral pyre~
3/31/2005 c1 5Jack the Ripper
The first stanzas were, to me, very reminiscent of the Avril song "Nobody's Home". In a good way. Abortion/miscarriage concept presented in the second stanza are very poignant. Nice, depressing, ending. Keep writing, your very good-Jack
3/30/2005 c1 91Sagaciouspnay
Oh wow. Another beautiful piece! I like the rhythm and flow. I feel like this girl sometimes in my life...-sigh- thank u for sharing =)
3/29/2005 c1 42and flowers
i might be becoming a quick fan of yours. kind of a bit delicate subject here (overused and overrated) and i like the way you portrayed it. nice job.

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