for Eyes5/1/2005 c1 
5genEve
very nice... sorta touching in some way or the other... have i told you how good you are? no? well, you're good =) hope you continue writing
5genEvevery nice... sorta touching in some way or the other... have i told you how good you are? no? well, you're good =) hope you continue writing
4/16/2005 c1 in love with you
that was wonderful. and it's very much true, if you can read eyes that is.
very nicely written.
that was wonderful. and it's very much true, if you can read eyes that is.
very nicely written.
4/4/2005 c1 24JuxA Person
wow, I'm not really an eye person, but I think you are since you hold the reason why people love eyes so much in this poem. Its true, however, and I try to avoid eye contact as a result of such vulnerability, as I feel they're peering into my soul.
24JuxA Personwow, I'm not really an eye person, but I think you are since you hold the reason why people love eyes so much in this poem. Its true, however, and I try to avoid eye contact as a result of such vulnerability, as I feel they're peering into my soul.
3/30/2005 c1 70mercury.love
Wonderful! Eyes really do convey everything... I fall in love with eyes. -Roses in RainP.S. Thanks for the review!
70mercury.loveWonderful! Eyes really do convey everything... I fall in love with eyes. -Roses in RainP.S. Thanks for the review!
3/30/2005 c1 74laughter at the funeral
this is nice...you gave a broader view and idea on what the eyes can do or show...good job!oh and pls if you have the time...pls do review some of my poems...thanks...
truly yours...
74laughter at the funeralthis is nice...you gave a broader view and idea on what the eyes can do or show...good job!oh and pls if you have the time...pls do review some of my poems...thanks...
truly yours...
3/30/2005 c1 47Kenishiro
i loved it, true, the eyes reveals much much more than we think. great piece of poetry! keep up the good work!
47Kenishiroi loved it, true, the eyes reveals much much more than we think. great piece of poetry! keep up the good work!
3/30/2005 c1 9MartinLundberg
so much meaning on something that seems so simple as eyes... thanks for the review but she wansnt the one... i dont keep cheaters. but thanks anyway. like your style. Peace out
9MartinLundbergso much meaning on something that seems so simple as eyes... thanks for the review but she wansnt the one... i dont keep cheaters. but thanks anyway. like your style. Peace out
3/30/2005 c1 15Macca Lane
bruilant the way you did it liek the flow that oyu ahve given to the poem and the pace that it has and this is so great in hwo ture it ais about hwo someones eyes can say so much about them and in some cases alsmt haunt oyu
15Macca Lanebruilant the way you did it liek the flow that oyu ahve given to the poem and the pace that it has and this is so great in hwo ture it ais about hwo someones eyes can say so much about them and in some cases alsmt haunt oyu