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9/17/2006 c1 42Emmytastic gal
I really like this. You have so much talent in writing so elegantly, so flawlessly, so effortlessly.

Not to mention - you write the best reviews anyone could ask for. So I just wanted to let you know how much that means to me, and how much I appreciate your words. There are some days when I read my stuff and I think, "wow this totally sucks" then I see your reviews and it's like they revive me and inspire me to keep writing, they keep me going.

Of course all of your poems/stories are totally and completely fabulous and marvelous and fantastic and outstanding as well...

So in summary, your writing rocks and thanks for all the support :)

-Em
7/24/2005 c1 FrozenKiwi
You are an excellent songwriter. Consider this a general review for all yoru songs. VERY good.
4/4/2005 c1 50C Robertson
This is fantastic, I wish i knew the music you had in mind for this, that would make it even better, for me. Again another fabulous piece of work. Nicely written and I love the theme of it. Bravo!
4/4/2005 c1 34Ethereal Kisses
Hi again, let's see what I can find to say about your latest poem.

I love the way you've almost but not quite repeated the first and third stanzas but changed certain crucial words. Freakin amazing :) I also think I understand it (that's even more amazing!). Love the rhyming as well.

~ Ethereal Kisses ~
4/1/2005 c1 132mizu no kokoro
Wah... nice~~i liked the constant rhyming~ gives the song reli great flow and rhythm~ Great job~

keep writing!
3/30/2005 c1 Blu Bird
Yo, Daniel don't be so hard on yourself...you're a really great writer...I didn't fall under a false pretense...I was captured by your writing...believe me...YOU ARE AN AWESOME WRITER...NEVER LET ANYONE TELL YOU ANY DIFFERENT!
3/30/2005 c1 266thin skin
*WOW*That is really good. I write songs too, and now I'm jealous!
3/30/2005 c1 DementedOracle
This is interesting. It's so common to examinine the flaws of humanity in literature, but this poem sort of contrasts an ideal of a "perfect" person with a black element of the world. Intriguing.

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