4/2/2005 c2 Shixa Goddess
I think you have an interesting idea, but the dialogue is very hard to understand, maybe you could just explain the type of accent they have instead of writing in the accent. Other than that I'd say you're doing pretty well.

3/30/2005 c1 5Ysuran
Nice, can't wait for chapter 1. One problem though. Earlier in the story you said "The greatest seer in the third era predicted as much" but later you say that it was "created in the fifth era." Just thought I'd point that out.