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4/13/2005 c1 onewingedgirl
interesting...deep...good...i like.
4/2/2005 c1 120hypocrite extrodinare
wah! whats with the sad poems? um... hypocritical of me, I have written 2 happy poems in my poetry career...
3/31/2005 c1 5Jack the Ripper
Another pristine example of your poetic capabilities. "She's not frowning-/just smile deprived" is brilliant! The use of conflicting emotions is both familiar and new at the same time-Jack
3/30/2005 c1 SagaciousPnay
I feel just the same as this girl. I especially like the ending! It was short and simple to read. Thanx for sharing! It's nice 2 know ppl. feel the same way as i do =)
3/30/2005 c1 40godsgurl
i like this, love the idea. I love the rhyme scheme and the flow. Another great poem.
3/30/2005 c1 22Chole Asterion
A very nifty poem. It reads and flows easily, I love it. The ending was great, Smile deprived, just perfect. Good job!

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