5/31/2005 c1 231Jakazul
Hi. Thanks for the great reviews! I don't mind if you post Barbie Doll Monster in the LJ community, as long as you give me credit and preferably put a link to my fictionpress account. I'm very glad that you liked it and will share it with others. I like your work and appreciate the comments.Peace.

~Jake

3/30/2005 c1 25Arutha
Ha, that was good. I think I followed it pretty well; the two "elementals" were like the 2 choices, and at the end it reveals the path taken? Something like that, I think, haha. Anyhow, awesome poem - keep it up.