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4/4/2005 c1 86welchs828
Woah. Nice touch. This is a very random topic, and it seems you, yourself, didn't know what you were going to end up writing about. But it turned out to be a pretty wicked-awesome poem-something that I don't think many people have pondered on or written, yet, it's such an awesome topic for a poem. And you're right...dance floors have been through so much trauma, and they start out beautiful, but eventually, they get worn-in and memory-filled and old and happy. Sort of like pants...

Nice poem, though!

Laterness,

-Paige :)
4/3/2005 c1 40sweetxinsincerity
that was awesome! i like the short stanzas and the rhyming, and the personification.
4/3/2005 c1 3Crazy Biene
NICE!
4/2/2005 c1 30Drizit
Hey! i like this one because of its message! You're becoming a real smooth writer!
4/1/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
so true & great personification
3/31/2005 c1 7swtdreamz101
o...you're giving justice to the floor! ;D haha funny, anyway nice poem

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