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3/31/2005 c1 Mina in Blue
This is no flame, man. I love it! Thanks for sharing this. It does remind me a lot of me and my brothers at seventeen. Everything from the senetence structure to the word choice is perfect, except I noticed you used to word "whilst" three times. It does fit the rest of the word, it doesn't really fit the voice. But once again, I LOVE it and I can't wait for more. Thank you, again! . Mina
3/31/2005 c1 7Shadow of Silver
Nice SongFic.Kimberly...that's an odd name to give a character. But, I suppose that it's irony, and it's accepted now, whatever.You need to work /way/ more on your spelling and grammar.(I love Green Day though!)[~Shadow of Silver~]

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