10/23/2005 c1 taylor dewitt
That is not the least bit dark...this is...You're face, I see it in my dreams,I pray to rid this grudge of my mind,I cant,I cant,I hope you know when I take the gun to my head,I hope you realize it's all you're fault,I picture our last moments,I pull the trigger

4/14/2005 c1 5Mizu Sousui
good poem, hope you make more (and thanx for reviewing my story)

3/31/2005 c1 6Nobody-n-Particular
Interesting choice of imagery to portray death.