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7/21/2005 c2 2Julian Read
I'm really enjoying this story, and I can't wait to see more. I love the way you write... you create this dark atmosphere in a place where just about anyone could live.
4/1/2005 c1 20Nightmare Catcher
Yes, first review! I like your story so far, it helps me to see the failings in my own. I like how you're letting the story build up gradually; it adds to the mystery. As for your original title, I think that just "Teddy Scare" would do, but it's up to you. Your current title is also very good. Keep writing!

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