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5/12/2005 c5 6Nobody-n-Particular
Don't worry... These words... You cannot be anything but true and beautiful. ;)
5/12/2005 c4 Nobody-n-Particular
It has a 'stream of consciousness' effect.
5/12/2005 c3 Nobody-n-Particular
You convey this carelessness about life in the wake of true passion.
5/8/2005 c5 41Suicidal Skies
Lovely. It seems to all connect with in each other. Keep up the goodness
5/8/2005 c2 Suicidal Skies
...Against, lovely. It's so pretty.
5/8/2005 c1 Suicidal Skies
Lovely. OO Just lovely
4/27/2005 c2 14method acting
beautiful. one of your bests
4/25/2005 c5 17Twisted-Smile-Bitter-Style
Some awesome descriptions in here. I love the imagery, it's really good. The line "strong enough to box the fear away" really stands out to me for some reason. Good job.
4/25/2005 c4 Twisted-Smile-Bitter-Style
Yeah, you do kind of fall apart there at the end. Try just writing something new from the second "go! Stop haunting me!" line. It's right around there that you start wandering away.
4/25/2005 c3 Twisted-Smile-Bitter-Style
Aw.
4/25/2005 c2 Twisted-Smile-Bitter-Style
This one's better. It's very beautiful:)
4/25/2005 c1 Twisted-Smile-Bitter-Style
Very descriptive. You try a little too hard, but you have beautiful wording, so... it balances out.
4/21/2005 c1 20Infection
This was superb loved the quality of it.
4/21/2005 c1 5inferno tempest
it was superb!
4/16/2005 c5 aknightsgoldenrose
Nice collection of poems. I think my fav one would have to be the second one.
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