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7/23/2009 c1 Fleur-de-lis Evans
This was very well-writen.

The rhyme scheme was interesting and it was an enjoyable poem to read.

As for changing poetry, I have to say that it takes time to find the kinds of poems you like to write, and maybe to not take the first draft as the only draft and revisit poems later on when it's been a few years since they were written.

Anyways Kudos on a beautiful poem!
9/27/2005 c1 Sweetdarts
Absolutely amazing. Write on. Best work so far that i had read.
6/22/2005 c1 155X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X
Really good poem, I enjoyed reading this one.
6/19/2005 c1 6Nobody-n-Particular
I like the movement to this, it is like the sea
6/14/2005 c1 6Soul's writings
What an excellent poem. You definitely have a talent for this! And a point on your note at the bottom: Inspiration is the best place to get a poem or any other type of writing. Keep it up!
5/31/2005 c1 18Starblossom
Lovely poem! I like how you described the iceberg. (It WAS an iceberg, right?)Actually, I enjoyed the entire poem. Good work!
4/5/2005 c1 11Cloud Burst
beautiful! u really captivated the sensuality of ur poem very well

great job!
4/3/2005 c1 61Stories-have-souls
The first line was a bit choppy, but otherwise, this was a sweet, well-worded poem.

And I see we both like the authors Garth Nix and Tamora Pierce (have you read her Immortals series? It's my favourite series of books).

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