for Writing Class4/20/2021 c18 heal me forever
Love it. Would’ve liked to know what happened to Krissy and Marcus. Oh well!
Love it. Would’ve liked to know what happened to Krissy and Marcus. Oh well!
12/6/2020 c18 Liane Kennedy
Great story! Really enjoyed it. Its held up well in the 15-years since you wrote it. Off to read some more of your work! Thanks!
Great story! Really enjoyed it. Its held up well in the 15-years since you wrote it. Off to read some more of your work! Thanks!
1/17/2016 c18 
1Du
The depth to which you portayed your characters is remarkable. I know this fic is even older than Better Than Burroughs, and I'm not even sure you'll read this review, but I just wanted to show how much I love your works. If you do read me, as always I wish you the best in life, Thank you for this beautiful story.
1DuThe depth to which you portayed your characters is remarkable. I know this fic is even older than Better Than Burroughs, and I'm not even sure you'll read this review, but I just wanted to show how much I love your works. If you do read me, as always I wish you the best in life, Thank you for this beautiful story.
9/17/2015 c18 fictionpress01
Wow.
Miranda and Finn have incredible, incredible voices. I love the way their tastes and their subtleties were presented through the tiniest differences and details in their speech and actions. The story flowed so well that oftentimes, I had to stop and go back and read a section just to appreciate nuances.
Dear Stillill, never stop writing.
Wow.
Miranda and Finn have incredible, incredible voices. I love the way their tastes and their subtleties were presented through the tiniest differences and details in their speech and actions. The story flowed so well that oftentimes, I had to stop and go back and read a section just to appreciate nuances.
Dear Stillill, never stop writing.
3/5/2014 c18 chipolata
Read this story yesterday and reread it again, because i love this story so much! It didn't feel rush at all. Lovely development. I definitely will read the spin off about Vince, if you write it!
Read this story yesterday and reread it again, because i love this story so much! It didn't feel rush at all. Lovely development. I definitely will read the spin off about Vince, if you write it!
9/2/2013 c16 6infinitelylydia
Finn reminds me so much of an old pen pal of mine that I had an infatuation with. Makes me wonder if I knew him in real life that we'd have some kind if relationship like Finn and Miranda did. Which makes me like the characters and story even more. Dang.. In love with this story.
6infinitelylydiaFinn reminds me so much of an old pen pal of mine that I had an infatuation with. Makes me wonder if I knew him in real life that we'd have some kind if relationship like Finn and Miranda did. Which makes me like the characters and story even more. Dang.. In love with this story.
3/8/2013 c18 csorciere
While it has been several years since this story completed, I decided to leave at least a little note saying how much I 'hated' it. I was hooked pretty quickly once I started reading this. I plan on combing through some of your other posts to see what other pieces of guilty pleasure I can dig up. Thank you for sharing this one and leaving it here for the masses to enjoy.
While it has been several years since this story completed, I decided to leave at least a little note saying how much I 'hated' it. I was hooked pretty quickly once I started reading this. I plan on combing through some of your other posts to see what other pieces of guilty pleasure I can dig up. Thank you for sharing this one and leaving it here for the masses to enjoy.
9/7/2012 c18 Jodes101
I really enjoyed this story, thank you so much for writing such lovable characters.
I really enjoyed this story, thank you so much for writing such lovable characters.
9/7/2012 c9 Jodes101
Sometimes I forget how similiar Australians are to the British, the references all made perfect sense to me and I didn't realise that Americans do not have the two finger salute.
This is a great chapter that gives a really good insight into Finn's friends.
Sometimes I forget how similiar Australians are to the British, the references all made perfect sense to me and I didn't realise that Americans do not have the two finger salute.
This is a great chapter that gives a really good insight into Finn's friends.
9/6/2012 c8 Jodes101
Occasionally the internal dialogue is very random and I am getting used to it but it is a bit unusual - not a bad thing though just different. Hello Vincent! its nice to see him here.
Occasionally the internal dialogue is very random and I am getting used to it but it is a bit unusual - not a bad thing though just different. Hello Vincent! its nice to see him here.
9/6/2012 c7 Jodes101
I really like the way you slip in lots of references to some really fantastic pop culture. You have reignited my love of Morrissey, The Smiths and Spinal Tap.
I really like the way you slip in lots of references to some really fantastic pop culture. You have reignited my love of Morrissey, The Smiths and Spinal Tap.
9/6/2012 c4 Jodes101
I can get a picture of Finn but not yet Miranda, hopefully she will develop over the next few chapters.
I can get a picture of Finn but not yet Miranda, hopefully she will develop over the next few chapters.