for You're Beautiful4/23/2005 c1 Ishuuuuuuuuuzu
Awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome! The ending was so sad but bittersweet. It was really beautiful ;) Very sweet and I like how you describe their thoughts. *bloody marys for you*
Awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome! The ending was so sad but bittersweet. It was really beautiful ;) Very sweet and I like how you describe their thoughts. *bloody marys for you*
4/4/2005 c1 
29Hangman
That was one of the most amazing things I have read in MY LIFE!Seriously, forgive my syntax but I loved it LoLzOmG!1!
I dont know about the song, I dont know if you wrote it at the end or if its something else but although on the same topic, I think the story on its own was sufficiently amazing. Im one of those people who fantasizes about people I see in public like that but... wow. This story was incredible. Seriously, no criticisms besides the song. Good work.
29HangmanThat was one of the most amazing things I have read in MY LIFE!Seriously, forgive my syntax but I loved it LoLzOmG!1!
I dont know about the song, I dont know if you wrote it at the end or if its something else but although on the same topic, I think the story on its own was sufficiently amazing. Im one of those people who fantasizes about people I see in public like that but... wow. This story was incredible. Seriously, no criticisms besides the song. Good work.
4/3/2005 c1 JazWillow so lazy to login
i like dthis story! it was cool!
i like dthis story! it was cool!