for You Are Perfect For Me4/30/2005 c1 Impychan
aw! omg, thats so beautiful, i LOVE it! really tender and heartfelt, you should write another.
aw! omg, thats so beautiful, i LOVE it! really tender and heartfelt, you should write another.
4/13/2005 c1 
42Emmytastic gal
whoa thas really good. I love it, i can definitely relate, I've felt like that too. The flow is pretty good too. keep it up...
write on...-Em
42Emmytastic galwhoa thas really good. I love it, i can definitely relate, I've felt like that too. The flow is pretty good too. keep it up...
write on...-Em
4/3/2005 c1 Tenshi-of-hikari
yeah it does sound like you like him. I try not to fall for my friends because things get to complicated. Great poem and hope you figure it all out. see ya
yeah it does sound like you like him. I try not to fall for my friends because things get to complicated. Great poem and hope you figure it all out. see ya
4/3/2005 c1 3Recondite Flatterings
very pretty poem =) i really liked how you repeated "Because" at the beginning of your lines...it added a nice touch and made it flow
very well done
3Recondite Flatteringsvery pretty poem =) i really liked how you repeated "Because" at the beginning of your lines...it added a nice touch and made it flow
very well done