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24Sarah-Brighteyes
O very intense poem. I loved the line, "Your words and voice/own image branded on my eyelids." It is sort of like you can see more than the outer image...sort of something burning in your mind. I loved the feel of this. The sort of incorrigible annoyance and yet trapped feeling. Great piece. Good format and flow. Bravo.
24Sarah-BrighteyesO very intense poem. I loved the line, "Your words and voice/own image branded on my eyelids." It is sort of like you can see more than the outer image...sort of something burning in your mind. I loved the feel of this. The sort of incorrigible annoyance and yet trapped feeling. Great piece. Good format and flow. Bravo.