for Do you realize?4/12/2008 c1 akb-inactive
Oh my goodness. This was an amazing piece. It's been two years since you wrote it, yet it still retains its magic. What I love is that it does have a feeling of flawed perfection to it. You pulled that off wonderfully - and I also love the fact there is a poetic, abstract feel to it. Great piece. Timeless too. A major bonus.
Oh my goodness. This was an amazing piece. It's been two years since you wrote it, yet it still retains its magic. What I love is that it does have a feeling of flawed perfection to it. You pulled that off wonderfully - and I also love the fact there is a poetic, abstract feel to it. Great piece. Timeless too. A major bonus.
7/8/2006 c1 AWorldAtMyFingertips
Aww, this was lovely! Really nice and so beautiful ^_^! Nice style of writing too.
And thank you for the reviews on my story...:)
Keep up the good work!
Aww, this was lovely! Really nice and so beautiful ^_^! Nice style of writing too.
And thank you for the reviews on my story...:)
Keep up the good work!
11/15/2005 c3 Rezie
Hey! Very wonderfully written. Beautiful in every way. And the plot is very forboding. I really love this! Great job! Please update soon, it's truly wonderful!
Hey! Very wonderfully written. Beautiful in every way. And the plot is very forboding. I really love this! Great job! Please update soon, it's truly wonderful!
11/14/2005 c1 
9The Gobbler
That's adorable! Really awesome description in there, too. And you leave some really tantalizing hints in there to make people wanna keep reading... awesome job!
9The GobblerThat's adorable! Really awesome description in there, too. And you leave some really tantalizing hints in there to make people wanna keep reading... awesome job!
11/9/2005 c1 Justin
It was pure perfection. The descrition was wonderful, just enough to take you to a place, or a person, rather. But not too much to give of the impression that all you can do is through around some figurative language. It works wonders that the object of perfection doesn't know she is perfect, it gives the rest of us a hope that we too are perfect. The end gives a delightful and cunning sense of reality to the story. I am torn between admiration and pity for your character. No, I still know this piece is perfect.
It was pure perfection. The descrition was wonderful, just enough to take you to a place, or a person, rather. But not too much to give of the impression that all you can do is through around some figurative language. It works wonders that the object of perfection doesn't know she is perfect, it gives the rest of us a hope that we too are perfect. The end gives a delightful and cunning sense of reality to the story. I am torn between admiration and pity for your character. No, I still know this piece is perfect.
10/9/2005 c1 13Silver Dolphin - archive
I'm loving it. Bittersweet perfection is the best (maybe the only?) kind.
13Silver Dolphin - archiveI'm loving it. Bittersweet perfection is the best (maybe the only?) kind.
4/5/2005 c1 converseoutlet3
This was really good. I really loved it..
This was really good. I really loved it..
4/4/2005 c1 8bulletproof.cupid
Wow, that was beautiful. The description was simply amazing and I liked what you said: "flawed perfection is better that perfection faked. believe in yourself, it's all you need." That is one killer theme =D Good job man,
~Bubblegum
8bulletproof.cupidWow, that was beautiful. The description was simply amazing and I liked what you said: "flawed perfection is better that perfection faked. believe in yourself, it's all you need." That is one killer theme =D Good job man,
~Bubblegum
4/4/2005 c1 24alivewithlove13
holy cow! that's incredible. it's so moving, it made me cry. that was really good. i love it.
24alivewithlove13holy cow! that's incredible. it's so moving, it made me cry. that was really good. i love it.