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9/1/2005 c1 28Tk.T
Abstract originality here! I especially liked: "For I hear the chiming clocks counting down, It's raindrops from irritated clouds" So original! That line was so cool!

Happy writing!

Tk.T~
8/13/2005 c1 64atalantea
Interesting. I love the play of words in this piece. Nice work. :D

Oh yeah, i don't get the title in connection to the piece... :D
5/2/2005 c1 27Suyu
i thought that was so deep.suyu.ps. and your name speechs for its self
4/5/2005 c1 64freeyourself
oh yah, for everyone who wants to know about the "spaces", its the only way i can make a separation between the poem paragraph thingies; for some reason, it wont separate with a simple space
4/4/2005 c1 13Kantessa
abstract, creepy, sad...

PERFECT.
4/4/2005 c1 43RedXfire
Good poems, Whats up with the spaces?

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