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1/14/2006 c1 25cornered.sensations
so simple yet so effective, great poem.
5/13/2005 c1 15liz anya
So simple... yet so powerful. Great job!
3/25/2005 c1 deleted-123-45
very strong poem, only one slightly distracting point: "so thick." Maybe 'thickly' or something, I don't know, it just kind of ruins the strength of the sentence. Nevertheless, welcome to my faves!
9/20/2004 c1 Moroni's Daughter
It was just foggy yesterday where I live. Excellent word choice.
3/21/2001 c1 19Celestial Phoenix
This has some powerful imagery...nice haiku.
1/28/2001 c1 kablam
cool haiku
1/26/2001 c1 13Kitsune-chan
wow! that was great!

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