for Stages8/6/2005 c1 FrozenKiwi
Wow. Just seriously, wow! That is a wonderful poem! Beautifully written, and I love your repetition and capitalization of key words.
On another not, muchos gracias for your kind reviews. Cheers!
Wow. Just seriously, wow! That is a wonderful poem! Beautifully written, and I love your repetition and capitalization of key words.
On another not, muchos gracias for your kind reviews. Cheers!
8/5/2005 c1 
64Tatsu the Blade Star
Acceptance? Bah! Accept nothing that you don't want to! You can hide and pretend, but never accept. or do. I suppose it is your choice...
Random rants aside, you are good at rhyming! It is hard to rhyme certan poems, but it gives them a special quality that can't be gotten any other way. (gotten...? is that even a word? It is now! Muahaha!) I enjoyed your balad of repressing anger! keep writing.
64Tatsu the Blade StarAcceptance? Bah! Accept nothing that you don't want to! You can hide and pretend, but never accept. or do. I suppose it is your choice...
Random rants aside, you are good at rhyming! It is hard to rhyme certan poems, but it gives them a special quality that can't be gotten any other way. (gotten...? is that even a word? It is now! Muahaha!) I enjoyed your balad of repressing anger! keep writing.
7/14/2005 c1 3Debbie-chan
No! No! You're wrong! Very good flow of good flowiness! Yes! Okay! I'm done now! ! !1 !
3Debbie-chanNo! No! You're wrong! Very good flow of good flowiness! Yes! Okay! I'm done now! ! !1 !
7/6/2005 c1 14method acting
I liked the steady beat and the rhythmic-nes of the repeating lines. Great job. Kickass raw emotion. snapsnap.
14method actingI liked the steady beat and the rhythmic-nes of the repeating lines. Great job. Kickass raw emotion. snapsnap.
5/22/2005 c1 11Cloud Burst
powerful poem, has a rhythm on its own and great flow! awesome work, keep it up!
11Cloud Burstpowerful poem, has a rhythm on its own and great flow! awesome work, keep it up!
4/29/2005 c1 130Relayer
Excellent, just excellent. All description is spot on, and even though I normally don't like rhyme it works here.
130RelayerExcellent, just excellent. All description is spot on, and even though I normally don't like rhyme it works here.
4/10/2005 c1 16Amethyst Eyed Cynical One
hey! this is good. i think it flows well and i like the repetition thing.adding to favs!
16Amethyst Eyed Cynical Onehey! this is good. i think it flows well and i like the repetition thing.adding to favs!
4/7/2005 c1 94born-again
Just brilliant, the rhyme is powerful but doesnt dominate the words themselves. Great poem.
94born-againJust brilliant, the rhyme is powerful but doesnt dominate the words themselves. Great poem.
4/6/2005 c1 Anime Freakizoid
hey how are you? full of emotions and totally original, go girl!-anime freakizoid X^_^X
hey how are you? full of emotions and totally original, go girl!-anime freakizoid X^_^X