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9/3/2005 c1 132mizu no kokoro
wow, alliteration?, lol, good poem nevertheless~

keep writing!
8/24/2005 c1 24Moonjava
Wow, this is so deep. So emotional and moving. Really nice.
8/6/2005 c1 FrozenKiwi
Wow. Just seriously, wow! That is a wonderful poem! Beautifully written, and I love your repetition and capitalization of key words.

On another not, muchos gracias for your kind reviews. Cheers!
8/5/2005 c1 64Tatsu the Blade Star
Acceptance? Bah! Accept nothing that you don't want to! You can hide and pretend, but never accept. or do. I suppose it is your choice...

Random rants aside, you are good at rhyming! It is hard to rhyme certan poems, but it gives them a special quality that can't be gotten any other way. (gotten...? is that even a word? It is now! Muahaha!) I enjoyed your balad of repressing anger! keep writing.
7/14/2005 c1 3Debbie-chan
No! No! You're wrong! Very good flow of good flowiness! Yes! Okay! I'm done now! ! !1 !
7/6/2005 c1 14method acting
I liked the steady beat and the rhythmic-nes of the repeating lines. Great job. Kickass raw emotion. snapsnap.
6/23/2005 c1 39Alisha Marie
Great job! I really liked this poem!
5/22/2005 c1 11Cloud Burst
powerful poem, has a rhythm on its own and great flow! awesome work, keep it up!
4/29/2005 c1 130Relayer
Excellent, just excellent. All description is spot on, and even though I normally don't like rhyme it works here.
4/25/2005 c1 1Link2Past
WHOA! very nice, i really like the ending! keep it up!
4/21/2005 c1 20Infection
the last line was superb, i liked the repition.
4/19/2005 c1 191Trinity Joselyn Carter
great again meeg. LOVE YA!
4/10/2005 c1 16Amethyst Eyed Cynical One
hey! this is good. i think it flows well and i like the repetition thing.adding to favs!
4/7/2005 c1 94born-again
Just brilliant, the rhyme is powerful but doesnt dominate the words themselves. Great poem.
4/6/2005 c1 Anime Freakizoid
hey how are you? full of emotions and totally original, go girl!-anime freakizoid X^_^X
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