for The CandyCane Anthology6/8/2005 c5 starrywitch
that's great! have you ever been in an abusive relationship, it sounds like the things you write you understand a lot more than you would otherwise.
that's great! have you ever been in an abusive relationship, it sounds like the things you write you understand a lot more than you would otherwise.
5/12/2005 c5 
32bleeding subterfuge
Wow... you connect really well through your poetry and let it come out into a beautiful form...i also like the emotional, truthfull qualities about your poem. it seems like you don't hold back.
32bleeding subterfugeWow... you connect really well through your poetry and let it come out into a beautiful form...i also like the emotional, truthfull qualities about your poem. it seems like you don't hold back.
4/16/2005 c3 9Jump Start My Heart
So far, these poems are great. You make them somewhat whimsical, which is good, because it grabs the reader's attention. You're a very good author. Continue the great work and I'll keep reading! =]
Thank you for reviewing 'Track Season'. It made my day. XD And the comment about his OCD will come into play later...but, at the moment, David actually does have mild OCD. But shh! No one is supposed to know! ;)
-Alyssa
9Jump Start My HeartSo far, these poems are great. You make them somewhat whimsical, which is good, because it grabs the reader's attention. You're a very good author. Continue the great work and I'll keep reading! =]
Thank you for reviewing 'Track Season'. It made my day. XD And the comment about his OCD will come into play later...but, at the moment, David actually does have mild OCD. But shh! No one is supposed to know! ;)
-Alyssa
4/12/2005 c3 123GothicSpook
Aw that poem is so sweet! I used to feel like that a long time ago over a boy I liked! Loads of poeple will so be able to relate to this!It was wonderfully written with great rhyming! Well done!
Ps: Thank you for the review!
123GothicSpookAw that poem is so sweet! I used to feel like that a long time ago over a boy I liked! Loads of poeple will so be able to relate to this!It was wonderfully written with great rhyming! Well done!
Ps: Thank you for the review!
4/12/2005 c2 270dustytiger
i really like this peice, and i think it's more cautionary then imitatable, good work and thank you for the review =8-D
270dustytigeri really like this peice, and i think it's more cautionary then imitatable, good work and thank you for the review =8-D
4/12/2005 c4 17incandescent.smiles
first, thank you SO much for reviewing, I had no idea that anyone would even read my poetry again if I came back to fictionpress. and also, I like this especially the part where it says "Though they touch the hearts of everyone In a melancholic state of mindThey look into the raindrops Who knows what they will find" oh I just really liked that part. Thanks again!
~leila*
17incandescent.smilesfirst, thank you SO much for reviewing, I had no idea that anyone would even read my poetry again if I came back to fictionpress. and also, I like this especially the part where it says "Though they touch the hearts of everyone In a melancholic state of mindThey look into the raindrops Who knows what they will find" oh I just really liked that part. Thanks again!
~leila*