
3/31/2007 c22
2autumnsprite
awesome! though i don't really get why the secret to the serum was gone. what happens now? i really want to read more about their lives! i loved this story so much, excellent writing!

awesome! though i don't really get why the secret to the serum was gone. what happens now? i really want to read more about their lives! i loved this story so much, excellent writing!
2/15/2007 c1 Lucy-the-bookworm
I just wanted to say that this was an amazing story. I cried and the ending was soo sweet! My only advice don't quit writing!
I just wanted to say that this was an amazing story. I cried and the ending was soo sweet! My only advice don't quit writing!
11/16/2006 c6 Postroyalty006
This is an amazing story. Great plot, very good characters, wonderful twists and the way things fell into place at the end was excellent. There were just a few typos but they don't really matter much. Keep writing, its excellent!
This is an amazing story. Great plot, very good characters, wonderful twists and the way things fell into place at the end was excellent. There were just a few typos but they don't really matter much. Keep writing, its excellent!
10/19/2006 c22 Alenor
you made me cry! that last chappie and the epilogue were so sad, but kinda sweet as well, so i'll call it bittersweet. this is a brilliant story though, cya later ~ Alenor.
you made me cry! that last chappie and the epilogue were so sad, but kinda sweet as well, so i'll call it bittersweet. this is a brilliant story though, cya later ~ Alenor.
9/24/2006 c20
10Death'sBestFriend
h...how could u m..make D..DO..Doug die -bursts into tears- im so sad but i lik ur story u should feel specail it made me cry and i havent cried in three years keep up the good writing

h...how could u m..make D..DO..Doug die -bursts into tears- im so sad but i lik ur story u should feel specail it made me cry and i havent cried in three years keep up the good writing
8/21/2006 c1
14D.M. Ralte
Wow, am liking how this sounds! Will read more in a bit...saving it to my favs. list!

Wow, am liking how this sounds! Will read more in a bit...saving it to my favs. list!
8/16/2006 c22 AubriannaKnight
awe... i'm so upset that dou is dead, but i'm also glad blade got a chance with laney.
awe... i'm so upset that dou is dead, but i'm also glad blade got a chance with laney.
8/8/2006 c21
2Rose Jameson
so there will be an epoilogue. I like how this chapter, being shorter then some of you other ones, seemed to tie up all the lose ends... I like it alot. This is was great story and I really enjoyed reading it! THANKS!

so there will be an epoilogue. I like how this chapter, being shorter then some of you other ones, seemed to tie up all the lose ends... I like it alot. This is was great story and I really enjoyed reading it! THANKS!
8/8/2006 c1 Guest
WTF is Phoenix city?
WTF is Phoenix city?
7/20/2006 c20 Casey
...this story was amazing. it made me cry. a lot. i also grew attatched to doug. but i like blade a lot also. it really was amazing. hats off. it takes a lot to make me cry, good job.
...this story was amazing. it made me cry. a lot. i also grew attatched to doug. but i like blade a lot also. it really was amazing. hats off. it takes a lot to make me cry, good job.
7/14/2006 c20
3LetMYEgoBe
i hate to say this. but i'm probably not the only one who feels this way. but "WHAT THE FRIGGEN HELL KINDA STUN IS THAT!" you killed Doug your a big meanie.

i hate to say this. but i'm probably not the only one who feels this way. but "WHAT THE FRIGGEN HELL KINDA STUN IS THAT!" you killed Doug your a big meanie.