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4/10/2005 c1 aditiiii
A very mysterious poem..full of emotions..I like it. Love all your work. Keep writing!
4/8/2005 c1
3NabilaDude. That, I think, is the most amazing thing you have ever written. The parallelism, the emotion, the diction, are all wonderfully in sync.Great job, dear. Might I inquire as to who this friend is (your twin up north)?
Cheers, love.Nabila
4/6/2005 c1
4PhilomelWonderful. You're hearing right now my praise, so I hope it will suffice for me just to say that 'I liked it' and 'it was like, woah, man.'
And if not, I loved the repetition/parallelism and rhyme. Keep it real. Man.