for Cries of a Mortuary5/10/2005 c1 
44Stormer
This was an awesome piece of poetry. It actually inspired me to write a new short story. Which I just wrote, and will go and upload *G*
44StormerThis was an awesome piece of poetry. It actually inspired me to write a new short story. Which I just wrote, and will go and upload *G*
5/6/2005 c1 60MuffinQueen
Oh, wow. I like a lot. The last verse was my favorite: "Surely, surely these souls are saved, God's legions come at last.A biting wind, the light grows weaker, Peter returns to pass."This is so full with striking imagery and a wonderful sort of...I'd call it hope, but that's not quite it.Thanks for the great Reviews on all my poems. You're amazing.
60MuffinQueenOh, wow. I like a lot. The last verse was my favorite: "Surely, surely these souls are saved, God's legions come at last.A biting wind, the light grows weaker, Peter returns to pass."This is so full with striking imagery and a wonderful sort of...I'd call it hope, but that's not quite it.Thanks for the great Reviews on all my poems. You're amazing.
4/22/2005 c1 42Emmytastic gal
hey... beautiful as always. check out some of my newer poems... thank you
write on...-Em
42Emmytastic galhey... beautiful as always. check out some of my newer poems... thank you
write on...-Em
4/11/2005 c1 13Shorty007
Hi, im one of Stephs(Blu Bird) friends... i just wanted to say nice work... keep it up... if you want read my stuff.. but yeah my name is Tiphani or Tiph but peace out..
13Shorty007Hi, im one of Stephs(Blu Bird) friends... i just wanted to say nice work... keep it up... if you want read my stuff.. but yeah my name is Tiphani or Tiph but peace out..
4/9/2005 c1 Blu Bird
I like it...your description of the coming of the end to someone's life is like definately a work of art...MAJOR MASTERPIECE...keep up the good work Daniel!
I like it...your description of the coming of the end to someone's life is like definately a work of art...MAJOR MASTERPIECE...keep up the good work Daniel!
4/7/2005 c1 50C Robertson
This is absolutely brilliant. I'm not a religious person in the least but I really like this, I love the imagery and the word choice is fascinating. The title suits it well. Over all this is a grand piece of work. Bravo!
50C RobertsonThis is absolutely brilliant. I'm not a religious person in the least but I really like this, I love the imagery and the word choice is fascinating. The title suits it well. Over all this is a grand piece of work. Bravo!
4/7/2005 c1 Ahemait
really really good. the lines were a bit long, in my opinion, bu whatever. good descriptiona nd imagery. brilliant idea nd overall job
really really good. the lines were a bit long, in my opinion, bu whatever. good descriptiona nd imagery. brilliant idea nd overall job
4/7/2005 c1 91fake-smiles-n-masks
wow...i just really like this...i love the word choice...great job...keep writing...bri
91fake-smiles-n-maskswow...i just really like this...i love the word choice...great job...keep writing...bri