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10/4/2010 c1 6babysheflies
Wow I really liked this (: I read heartbreak an decided I liked this one better by the way!
8/1/2005 c1 1Parfume
Hm, I like your poem heartbreak more, BUT I like this one as well. haha.
5/17/2005 c1 5svonnah-la-fay
I think this sonnet is better than your other one.

I wanted to comment on the reality of this poem. It was different than the other sonnets I have read (mainly Shakespeare) because some lines are not as long as others, so it was a bit unnerving to read at first, but you got all of your syllables in, and it was cool. I also wanted to tell you that I liked the way things rhymed -it wasn't forced, it simply told the story.

Good job.
4/10/2005 c1 ccccccyynnnnnn
hi

this one kinda weird its more of a listing bulima is seious u should make it more i dunno the word a little more depressing to reach the point (like how u say mine r too depressing!)pretty good though

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