for New Kid3/27/2010 c6 
12Caleb Kruspe
Okay um wow. A bit-o-boy-fluff, standing up to A* 'friends' and trying to make things right. Now that's a rollercoaster ride of what's gonna happen next.
12Caleb KruspeOkay um wow. A bit-o-boy-fluff, standing up to A* 'friends' and trying to make things right. Now that's a rollercoaster ride of what's gonna happen next.
3/19/2010 c3 Caleb Kruspe
Hm, very very interesting. Now I've gotta read on to see how it plays out between Adam and Gavin.
Hm, very very interesting. Now I've gotta read on to see how it plays out between Adam and Gavin.
2/10/2008 c10 kiki
please update!
please update!
10/6/2007 c6 11MlleKathy
Lol omigosh.. I had no idea that you had the same name for your characters. :) Just know that I got the name, "Gavin" from my nephew, I like that name so I chose it lol.. And how weird, Adam is Elliot's middle name. XDD I got that from my cousin, I get most of the names for my characters from family members. "Ethan" is my half-brother.
Whelp! Thanks for reading my story, I really like this one! I like how you write, I need to slow down a bit on my storys things change so fast XD I just can't wait to get all the mysteries solved. Thanks anyway! -Kathy
11MlleKathyLol omigosh.. I had no idea that you had the same name for your characters. :) Just know that I got the name, "Gavin" from my nephew, I like that name so I chose it lol.. And how weird, Adam is Elliot's middle name. XDD I got that from my cousin, I get most of the names for my characters from family members. "Ethan" is my half-brother.
Whelp! Thanks for reading my story, I really like this one! I like how you write, I need to slow down a bit on my storys things change so fast XD I just can't wait to get all the mysteries solved. Thanks anyway! -Kathy
7/15/2007 c10 2mia5081
I love the story so far, and was wondering if you ever plan on finishing it. Please? lol
Update soon!
~Mia
2mia5081I love the story so far, and was wondering if you ever plan on finishing it. Please? lol
Update soon!
~Mia
5/2/2007 c10 Untitled Absence
I have to say, I find it...difficult to do my work when my inspiration is lacking. And now that I'm on my last week before finals, I could really use some reassuring...but my favorite story hasn't been updated in so long...gah!
I have to say, I find it...difficult to do my work when my inspiration is lacking. And now that I'm on my last week before finals, I could really use some reassuring...but my favorite story hasn't been updated in so long...gah!
1/5/2007 c10 Shun Arima
Hey goofball... They copywrited it to YOU. Not to their site. They're doing you a favor, no one can steal and reproduce your work without getting in trouble since fictionpress is protecting you w/ the copywrite. Pleas update soon.
Hey goofball... They copywrited it to YOU. Not to their site. They're doing you a favor, no one can steal and reproduce your work without getting in trouble since fictionpress is protecting you w/ the copywrite. Pleas update soon.
12/5/2006 c10 Jess
© Copyright 2005 Esquirella (FictionPress ID:241472). All rights reserved. Distribution of any kind is prohibited without the written consent of Esquirella.
Isn't that what you meant? I see it, does it not appear on your comp?
© Copyright 2005 Esquirella (FictionPress ID:241472). All rights reserved. Distribution of any kind is prohibited without the written consent of Esquirella.
Isn't that what you meant? I see it, does it not appear on your comp?
11/4/2006 c2 paputsza
Every once in a while, i scroll up just to see if it's /really/ rated M. And then I squeal in joy when i discover that it is!
Every once in a while, i scroll up just to see if it's /really/ rated M. And then I squeal in joy when i discover that it is!
10/4/2006 c9 3Anti-Socialite
You just stop posting chapts on this one then? Huh well ok it would be nice to know the rest but you more things I suppose.
3Anti-SocialiteYou just stop posting chapts on this one then? Huh well ok it would be nice to know the rest but you more things I suppose.