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6/9/2005 c1 148Moroni of the Mount of Ro
Hmm. I think the ending was a little too blunt. I like an ending that really closes it off - at least, in a story like this - but this one seemed too sudden; it didn't have enough emphasis, so you kind of skipped right over it. The ending is, in my opinion, the most important part of a story.

Also, I wanted to reassure you that my poem, "Empty Words" was not about you in any way. I appreciate you signing your reviews with "I Love You", and you are most certainly still my friend. I don't think I was ever mad at you. Ever.
4/10/2005 c1 108Kirona of the skies
Ooh, I see you got a new title. Much better than the one I gave you. Much. ^_^; Snaps to you, dearie.
4/9/2005 c1 Libby Lou
Is this the END! It's so...ABRUPT! ::spazz:: I want more! ::begs:: pweze? I like it. Oh, and was he really in love with her or did he know that she was the murderer by then? And if it IS the end, I'll get over it, but really, I don't want it to be.
4/9/2005 c1 1GoldEyeFox
You have a nice start amazingblazes. Keep up the good work! ^_^

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