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4/10/2005 c1 95beti213
hm... I'm going to at least attempt to make sense of it, but excuse me if I botch it... I'm seeing it as almost taking turns with perspective. my favorite stanzas are the third and fourth; they give clearer and more intense imagery than the others. maybe you could try hinting at events during the murder throughout the poem... anyway, I liked it, even though I was confused, because it was the most deftly rhymed poem I've read in a while. well done.

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